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PostSubject: Provoking the Suicide King   Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:09 am

The news that had been playing suddenly went haywire and the screen went black only to be replaced with a ruby red color screen. as an discombobulated voice spoke subtitles filled the red canvas.


"Suicide King, is that how you see yourself? Kira thought himself a god, you a king?"
"You are no King, you are a Criminal, you are an emotional unstable person and its time for you to turn yourself in."
"The suicide you are pushing on to criminals does not make them atone for what they have done, it is not up to you to decide who lives and who dies. They do not feel what you make them write, they are not sorry for what they have done, and you have failed."
"Give yourself up now, and pay for the crimes you have committed."



The screen glitched out and the news broad cast returned to air. Ruby sat at her computer at home with a smirk on her face. 'Your move Suicide King...'

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PostSubject: Re: Provoking the Suicide King   Wed Apr 04, 2012 4:43 pm

As Hunter was finishing his shift at the cafe, the television suddenly went haywire and flashed a bright red. At first he though it was just the television being stupid, but then it began speaking. It was calling him out, telling him what he was. Instead of infuriating him like the voice most likely assumed, it only made him smile. At last the investigators had gotten off of their asses and involved. But as the time went by, the 'provoking' seemed more and more like a joke. To him it seemed like they were aware that he could manipulate the people, but to the average person it would sound like a bunch of nonsense. How could one man or woman be in so many places? How could they force another person's hand? The people of japan had already seen a man commit suicide on the news before writing a message. So suddenly the voice trying to taunt him had just made itself seem a bit less credible. As soon as the screen went blank, Hunter retreated to the break room where he had another slip of paper from his Death Note. It was time to give a rebuttal that the public would never forget.

The young man scribbled in the name of the news anchor, Kaname Kondou, reporting live shortly after the message meant for him. With his Death Note, he could make anything possible. The whole country would bear witness to his work. Shortly after writing the name, he went on to relay his own message,

"After the sudden message, Mr. Kondou will grow extremely pale and begin to shiver uncontrollably. He will attempt to leave, but the lights will flicker on and off while a techie in the back manipulates the teleprompter; leaving a message that only the anchor could see. After reading the message, tears will fall from his eyes as he reads it aloud for everyone to hear.

"And who do you think you are trying to call me out? How does one person force the suicide of another? You continue to call me unstable, a criminal. But what are you? How do you know that the people that have killed themselves don't feel true despair for their sins? For example, how do you explain the first suicide of the man that took the children hostage? The whole country could see that he was feeling true despair. In his despair he tried to kill himself, but failed. How could another person force his hand? I was helping him do what he didn't have the courage to do for himself. I gave him the tools to commit suicide. I provided everything he needed to get the job done. So all I am guilty of in that respect is providing unlicensed weaponry.

The second suicide, the abuser... He asked me to help him atone for harming his wife and children. I provided the pain pills, and in return I simply asked that he left a message. I asked him to let the world know that it was he who killed himself out of his own free will, but I gave him the courage to do it. So all that I am guilty of is providing stolen pain medication. He broke the mirror, he sliced his wrists, and he wrote the message. So while you sit behind your little computer screen, calling me a failure... I want to know something, where did you succeed? Were you able to catch the last person that caused a number of heart attacks in succession? Were you able to keep criminals from dying? NO YOU WEREN'T! While you consider yourself all high and mighty, you deliberately chose not to keep them safe. All you needed to do was stop reporting names, stop announcing arrests and they would be alive right now. You are a hypocrite... You had the means, you had the opportunity, you had the ability to keep them all from being killed... But you failed. And that person you call 'Kira' is still wandering the streets without so much as a scrape.

I don't decide who lives or dies in this world, they decide it for themselves and come to me in order to do it. They need a gun, I provide it. They need pills, I provide them. They need a noose, I make it. All I have done is given them the tools to do what they wanted to do all along. In return, I just ask that they credit me for giving them what they needed. I am not a murderer. Am I a criminal? In your eyes, yes. But to those that wish to end their own lives, I am simply a savior. So even if you do manage to find me, I can only be arrested for providing the tools that ended their lives.

Before you attempt to call me these things, I suggest you do your research. You'll find that I'm right. I am not 'innocent' but I am not guilty of being a murderer like you want to label me. If you want the suicides to stop, you will work harder to keep those arrested under wraps. But unfortunately there's too much tape to cut through. You can't afford to save them all, and you are not able to keep prisoners from killing themselves. No matter what you try to do, you will never be able to call me a murderer, no matter which way you try to spin it.

As for being emotionally unstable, that isn't true at all. Those that are willing to ask me for the tools to kill themselves are the ones who are unstable. If I were unstable, I wouldn't have the heart to let those people commit suicide. So think about my words, try to spin them around if you like, try to make me look like a monster. But in reality, I'm just one person that wants to help these unfortunate people end their own lives. I'm just letting people know that I am there to help them when they have no-one else to turn to. I am their Suicide King. And There is no way that you can keep a man or woman from committing suicide. Every man and woman alive has a skeleton in their closet. And for those that can't live with it, I am there to help them die with it.

Before you attempt to pick out my faults, my 'failures' take a look at your own. Then you will see who out of the two of us had really failed."


And after the man finished reading the message, he will bite down into his own tongue and drown himself in blood. But before his vision fades to black, he will write the letters 'SK' in blood on the white sheet of paper in front of him while the people in the studio watch in horror. Then the news will simply cut off, revealing another message in small white text. 'Goodbye'."

When his writings came true, Hunter lit the paper on fire and waited for it to burn away before sweeping the ashed right into the ashtray where the staff put their cigarette butts. Don't ever try to call me out again...

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PostSubject: Re: Provoking the Suicide King   Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:08 am

Ruby watched the news with smirk, 'Someone dosn't like to be called out.'

She once again hacked the system.


"Euthanasia is illegal, you are a murder. I am not with the police, I have no roll in protecting people, my roll is to catch you. You are a fraud, a charlatan, and I will find you like I found Blue."


Blue- Ren, perhaps Ren had been Kira and now she passed her power to the suicide king. If so he would know when she said Blue she meant Ren's blue hair.
'if they are working together this will shake his faith in her, it also means i may have seen them together, ... or Jack.... Is that why he's dead?'

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PostSubject: Re: Provoking the Suicide King   Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:15 am

(Actually, nowadays euthanasia isn't illegal. The whole right to die campaign for people that wish to end their lives while they still have the competency to make the decision. From what I've seen so far, your character is drawing pieces together without solid evidence.)
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PostSubject: Re: Provoking the Suicide King   Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:21 am

((My character isn't a cop she isn't even a detective. She is just average Joe with a gun and a military back ground. Shes instinctive, don't people get that lol.))

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PostSubject: Re: Provoking the Suicide King   Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:38 am

(But instincts don't bring cases. For all she knows her instincts can send her barking up all the wrong trees. She also seems to know things about the Suicide King that he hasn't even given reasons for anyone to suspect.

"She headed into her room away from her web and stat at her computer, she Profiled the Suicide King.
Male, 'a woman would make it a cleaner death.'
Age: 20 to 25 'Much older then the first Kira more clear thinking, but still young enough to think like this.'
Possible attempted suicide, loss of loved one, addiction, Criminal, deflective, mentally unstable, trust issues."

First thing: There are several events in history that contradict this. In the concentration camps during the holocaust, there are accounts from both prisoners and former Nazis that the females were the most brutal and sadistic of the guards. There are also numerous accounts of grisly murders committed at the hands of women, some of which are more ghastly than those done by some men.

As for the age, I can't seem to figure out just how after only 2 suicides that someone would be able to find an age. There are some teenagers with the maturity of sages and there are elderly people that act like children.

Second thing: How can a person determine things such as 'Addiction, loss of a loved one, deflective, or mentally unstable' without having so much as a real conversation with the person in question. In the two killings, the Suicide King gave no hint at 'loss of loved one' or 'addiction'. Instead of mental instability, you could possibly look for similarities between the victims. In the profile she has given, it's way too close for comfort without any real investigation.

Also... What do you mean by 'think like this'. When it comes to detective rp's and whatnot, you can't be vague when doing something as important as a criminal profile. And for an 'average joe' like you describe her, she has way too many assets at her disposal.

And I don't think they would still be on the air after witnessing a man KILL HIMSELF on live television again. That stuff would be shut down asap.
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PostSubject: Re: Provoking the Suicide King   Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:50 am

((calm down man o.o those were all assumptions, none of it had any real base she just was shooting random thoughts.))

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PostSubject: Re: Provoking the Suicide King   Fri Aug 17, 2012 3:51 am

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PostSubject: Re: Provoking the Suicide King   Sun Sep 01, 2013 4:09 am

i do not believe that kira would consider himself as a "king"... he thinks to highly of himself to put himself under such a low title. maybe he thinks he is lord of death, or maybe god of death. that must be it, due to the fact he is using death as it were a divine act of righteousness and that he was suited to pass the judgement of death on others because he has labled himself god. maybe his perspective of god is death. and since he can control who dies when they will die how they will die and where they will die he feels suited to be a god. although im not sure if it should be under the title "suicide GOD" because that would be an inaccurate title to put uppon him due to the fact that not every kill was a suicide kill. and depending on how you look at it, maybe none of the deaths caused by kira can be suicide due to the fact that the victim has no control of how he dies once the name is written in the book.the only way it can be suicide is if the victim kills his\her self before the specified time written. but even if doing so, kira had no control of that death, therefore i do not believe that the title "suicide king" is appropriate for kira. but after all this is just my opinion. just food for thought...or just a thought of my own...
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PostSubject: Re: Provoking the Suicide King   Sun Sep 01, 2013 10:34 am

Hunter Kieff wrote:
(But instincts don't bring cases. For all she knows her instincts can send her barking up all the wrong trees. She also seems to know things about the Suicide King that he hasn't even given reasons for anyone to suspect.

"She headed into her room away from her web and stat at her computer, she Profiled the Suicide King.
Male, 'a woman would make it a cleaner death.'
Age: 20 to 25 'Much older then the first Kira more clear thinking, but still young enough to think like this.'
Possible attempted suicide, loss of loved one, addiction, Criminal, deflective, mentally unstable, trust issues."

First thing: There are several events in history that contradict this. In the concentration camps during the holocaust, there are accounts from both prisoners and former Nazis that the females were the most brutal and sadistic of the guards. There are also numerous accounts of grisly murders committed at the hands of women, some of which are more ghastly than those done by some men.

As for the age, I can't seem to figure out just how after only 2 suicides that someone would be able to find an age. There are some teenagers with the maturity of sages and there are elderly people that act like children.

Second thing: How can a person determine things such as 'Addiction, loss of a loved one, deflective, or mentally unstable' without having so much as a real conversation with the person in question. In the two killings, the Suicide King gave no hint at 'loss of loved one' or 'addiction'. Instead of mental instability, you could possibly look for similarities between the victims. In the profile she has given, it's way too close for comfort without any real investigation.

Also... What do you mean by 'think like this'. When it comes to detective rp's and whatnot, you can't be vague when doing something as important as a criminal profile. And for an 'average joe' like you describe her, she has way too many assets at her disposal.

And I don't think they would still be on the air after witnessing a man KILL HIMSELF on live television again. That stuff would be shut down asap.
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